Hi this is a biker type of character i just drew...maybe you could find som ways of improving him...i thought of making him fat but i'm not sure...what do you think?
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/cooling.JPG
here's the other
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/fetcooling.JPG
I think he looks better skinny.
I like the fat version a lot! (And the other isn't bad at all!) but I think it would make more sense for his fat belly to hang a little lower than it does in your pic. All round good work here though :)
ah yeah...i thought of that too hehe...I'll try to lower his fat belly some more
I also like the one with the beer belly ^_^. I think his shirt should be a little longer towards the back (ie. it only rides up the front because of his belly) so that it doesn't look like a halter top.
I think he could use a leather jacket and maybe some flames or something like that on his bandana..... Just a few little suggestions to make him look a little tougher.
PLEASE post your images only in gif or png format. The artifacting caused by jpeg not only makes your work look less good than it should but it makes effective edits all but impossible. BMP is also acceptable if you display it as a link rather than an image. As for the character, it is difficult for me to make out details on him, though I would say that he looks more like a comedic character or a low level villain than a tough guy.
Ah well the game is supposed to be comedic so hehe
here's the updated one
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/fat_biker.PNG
I like that one better, the original fat guy looked like he had breast implants in his belly.
I think you should make the pants fatter where it meets his stomach.