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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: BruisedWeasel on Tue 27/01/2004 09:01:59

Title: An average guy
Post by: BruisedWeasel on Tue 27/01/2004 09:01:59
I was debating whether or not I wanted any c&c on this. I actually don't, but then, input is always a good thing. This little guy is only for practice, hence his bland stiffness. I'll be using him to practice some basic walking/doing stuff animations, ergo I'm not really concerned with shading at the moment.

Actually, what I really want is you to express your admiration for this little man, and for my skill.

(http://gallery.passion4art.com/members/weaseltit/mjross.gif)

Now gush away, please. And to answer the question, this image is based on a sprite template I made, so this style will be used in something.
Title: Re:An average guy
Post by: Nacho on Tue 27/01/2004 09:06:31
/me expresses his admiration for bruised and her little man... \o/
Title: Re:An average guy
Post by: ScottDoom on Tue 27/01/2004 09:11:42
The forehead needs some wrinkle lines or something. And the hair needs more detail somehow.

Other than that, THIS OWNS! I love the style.
Title: Re:An average guy
Post by: [Cameron] on Tue 27/01/2004 09:34:56
It sorta reminds me of Dave Gilbert
Title: Re:An average guy
Post by: on Wed 28/01/2004 03:39:37
Scott: Actually, I'm a bit worried wrinkles on the brow might crowd that tiny area, except when the face is expressing a brow-utilising emotion. I think I can see your point though, since all shading and detail seems to stop at the glasses. The upper half of the head looks a bit bland. I'm uncertain how to add detail to the hair. I have a bad habbit of adding too much detail.

Alec: Heh, it does, doesn't it? Actually, the photo I used as a reference was a guy (yes, from the forum) who looks a bit like our old pal Dave.

Farlander: Thanks man. I'm glad I can rely on you and your eagerness to kiss the ass of the wimmons. You totally rule!
Title: Re:An average guy
Post by: Evil on Wed 28/01/2004 04:37:33
Bruised, you get better every time you post. He looks great in general. His mouth and shirt look amazing however the lack of detail like this on the other parts of the body makes it loose some of its amzing style. Glasses need deatail for sure, no questions. Still looks great. Bring us more pictures of teh sexy bluecup. I miss those days.