C&C on new background please!

[BerserkerTails]

A background for the opening of my game, "The Adventures of Jon Rutherford: Tablet of Altheria"



Tell me what this scene makes you think, and any suggestions you have on it, please make them! Thanks!

[kaaZ]

that's pretty good...

+ Good composition.
+ Nicely drawn.

- Lack of depth. You could add some highlights and shadings. The brown  area for instance could use some cooler tones in the back and warmer tones in front to bring in depth. Also you seem to be inconstistend on this shading thing...the tree has good shading just like the dropshadow from the bushes...but the log is just plain brown just like the leaves on the tree and the bushes.
- The area seems to be a bit light for a night. I think the use of slightly darker colors would look better.

hope this helps a bit...

[BerserkerTails]

Thanks Kaaz! I'll work on it some more soon.

I forgot to mention, that the image *WILL* be darker in the actual game, this is just to show you what has been done before I darken it.