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Title: Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Ishmael on Sun 18/05/2003 09:24:52
(http://kotisivu.mtv3.fi/tk/char2.gif)

Just tell me what you think...
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Jimi on Sun 18/05/2003 10:58:25
Good, but she could do with a nose, and her hands are slightly rounded too much
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Ishmael on Sun 18/05/2003 14:22:53
Oops...  :D I knew I forgot something...
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Eero on Sun 18/05/2003 15:39:22
Oh, and left arm kind of disappears...
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Ishmael on Sun 18/05/2003 18:23:25
It's under the other one... I have seen someone standing in that position, and it looked like that.. well, I'll go work on it...
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Archangel (aka SoupDragon) on Sun 18/05/2003 18:33:06
we need to be able to see her left hand holding her right bicep
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Ishmael on Mon 19/05/2003 18:17:07
Ok, I did changes to it twice:

(http://kotisivu.mtv3.fi/tk/char2_v2.gif)
(http://kotisivu.mtv3.fi/tk/char2_v3.gif)

what next? :P
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: MadReizka on Mon 19/05/2003 21:17:22
She needs some womanly shapes...
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: 12431 on Mon 19/05/2003 21:17:52
well, on that last pic, her arms are really long!
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Synthetique on Mon 19/05/2003 22:51:06
it's a she? breasts are where??
or she is maybe a truckie?
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Ishmael on Tue 20/05/2003 11:43:15
Quotewell, on that last pic, her arms are really long!

yes, they are.... I will fix that later...

Quoteit's a she? breasts are where??

Man, are you all here just after boobs?? She is a teenager... Or should I get a photo of one so you see my point?
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Synthetique on Tue 20/05/2003 12:17:22
omg.. teens in your country dont have them? my my.. u know.. my little brother even has his own pair

edit:

she looks like a metal dude
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Ali on Tue 20/05/2003 13:36:54
I hope you don't mind, but I had a shot at making her look a little more girl-like:

(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://themonkeyhut.tripod.com/girl.gif)

I hardly changed it at all, but I think she looks a bit more like a girl. I rounded her hips, shaded under her chest, sloped her shoulders,  gave her girlier hair and tweaked the mouth ever so slightly. She might look a bit too old now...hmm.

Again, I hope you don't mind.
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Synthetique on Tue 20/05/2003 21:46:40
hey.. that new one is great! nice..
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Jimi on Tue 20/05/2003 21:48:57
she looks kinda like shes sitting down.
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Ishmael on Wed 21/05/2003 07:17:09
Well.... I dont know anymore whats going on in here... (make sense?) I'll see what I can do...
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: n3tgraph on Wed 21/05/2003 07:31:04
well, ali just helped you out :)
Title: Re:Another char form Ashrad
Post by: Ishmael on Wed 21/05/2003 12:48:54
I know, and I apriceate (sp?) it, but I was in a bit bad mood earlier... sorry  :P