Comments for my fish.

[FZ]

Hello.
I drew a fish for my game. I'll call him... John Fish.
If anybody wants to, they could give me some c&c, because I ain't too happy with the outline and the rest of it.

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And let me know if you can't see the pics.

[Peter Thomas]

You don't like the outline? Personally, I think it looks really good.

I'm not sure what emotion you're trying to give him, though. In #1, he just looks a bit sleepy, but by your final take, I get the feeling he wants me dead! I'd maybe make the eyes not quite so yellow, as that makes him look a bit drunk, too, or on lsd.

On the whole, though, an extremely atmospheric fish. That felt weird to say...

[Reptile]

I love it, its perfect. 

[Phemar]

Brilliant imo

[Babar]

Very nice. Perhaps you could add some gills?

[Andail]

superquick edit.



Just some ideas. At least the light in his eye should stay...the scales need to be pixelated properly, of course....

[Micek]

Can you tell me, whe looks "John Fish" so annoyed?

[Peter Thomas]

Can you tell me, whe looks "John Fish" so annoyed?

Mmm, I'm still wondering about that, too. No doubt everyone's comments are spot on - this is a brilliant little sprite, but I get the feeling that he wants to be happy, but is looking angry instead. I want to give him a big hug and say "It's okay... it's okay..."

[Nightfable]

I love Andail's rendition of your fishy the best...
and I think that the angry look on its face suits it perfectly!

Also...

I do have the odd urge to hug it and make it all better!Ã, 

[Babar]

It looks like it has an odd urge to bite off the head of anyone who tries anything like that..

[Flippy_D]

I prefer it unedited. That's a really characteristic sumbitz.