Another MIDI, more of a Rock-inspired

[rtf]

OK, OK, before I give you the link, You may be thinking that becasue I have just posted another MIDI, that I just post everything to show off my developing skills.  That is not true.
I am using this MIDI in one of my upcoming projects.  I think it isn't too bad, but can always improve, and I know that a ton of people here can help.  That is why I want some C, as well as some C.  Here is an example of C and C for my MIDI:

It's repetitive

Don't say that.  I know it is.  Everything I do is.

PS:  You actually have to turn up your volume if you really eant to hear all of the instruments (My Fault) :

[stuh505]

1 - really love the sound that comes in at 0:15
2 - the rhythm that comes in at 0:26 is too loud and not good enough to be so prominent in the rest of the song.  at this time, 0:26, you stray paths...you could opt to go a different route, using more of the style before this point, using some echoes and stuff that would be really cool
3 - the pause is a bit too abrupt; fade the sound out really quick i think instead of cutting it off.  also, keep the melody that comes in at 0:04 going through this pause
4 - i really like how you come in strong after the pause, but...
5 - at 1:02 you ruin it.  i am expecting something more pleasing at this point.  instead of doing whatever you do here, copy the section from 1:00-1:02 and replay it.  that would be good.

[rtf]

Alright!  Critisizm made me stronger once again.  Thanks.  I have those fixed and will upload it again when i wake up from lazy-state.