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Title: Antagonizing Janice
Post by: Mr_Frisby on Sun 30/07/2006 09:17:39
Drew this today - thought it was a little entertaining.
Let me know what you think - (dont say i need therapy Ã, ;))

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bbatdrsod_clump.jpg%3Cbr%20/%3E)
Title: Re: Joyce C Clump
Post by: pslim on Sun 30/07/2006 11:14:19
Hahaha. This is great, Mr_Frisby. I really enjoyed the subtlety of the humor. Heh heh this could be on its way to syndication.
Title: Re: Joyce C Clump
Post by: Ali on Sun 30/07/2006 11:15:55
It's very like Edward Gorey, though a little less terse and obscure. The character's bewildered expressions are great. I'd love to see it inked, and not on lined paper!

The only improvement I'd suggest would be to order the vignettes more carefully, and dispense with the 3D arrows (which seem to have been photoshopped in?).
Title: Re: Joyce C Clump
Post by: PureGhostGR on Sun 30/07/2006 12:16:23
Very nice and quite funny to read. I did enjoy the face expressions in both her and the dogs.

Well done!  :)
Title: Re: Joyce C Clump
Post by: Kweepa on Sun 30/07/2006 15:45:54
Great stuff!
It suffers somewhat from illegibility, but not as much as Eggie's work.
Title: Re: Joyce C Clump
Post by: Mr Flibble on Mon 31/07/2006 21:31:46
Reminded me of Quentin Blake's work, and thats no bad thing.
Title: Re: Joyce C Clump
Post by: Mr_Frisby on Tue 01/08/2006 11:12:52
Thanks for the loverly comments - I love gorey and quentin blake so thanks.

Ali - Duly noted - as these are a couple of panels that worked form my sketch book I just stuch them together in gimp (to cheap for fotoshop (too cheap to us the letters ph at the start of foto). Thus the lined paper and drawn in biro (blue pen).

The labrador makes me laugh most -  oh and the concept of crotch bulbs.

Cheers,
thanks for responding.

(ps "It suffers somewhat from illegibility, but not as much as Eggie's work." Ha H!)
Title: Re: Joyce C Clump
Post by: Mr_Frisby on Sun 17/09/2006 12:39:59
Monkeys broke wind near me and this happened!
Hope the swearing isn't to offensive to you young inocent pups.

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/janice.jpg)

Sometimes I feel sorry for my toons because of all the crazy stuff I get them to do so I think "hey should I let them say how it makes them feel?"
Then I think "neh ! stuff them."


Then I think "Hey , a cookie!"


hints due to illegibility are below:
Spoiler
Janice here is a little apprehensive:
"I'm a little apprehensive, I've not been in a cartoon before"
"Cartoonists always make you look dumb, What if they get me to do something stupid . ."
"and I'm made to look a total fool . . . probably he'll give me bunnyears at some point"
"Yeah! and then that sonovabitch will start making fun of my buck teeth"
"That motherfucker, how dare he!, what did I do to him the prick?!"
"Hey cartoonist I've changed my mind!"
"Giant Fukstiks!"
[close]
Title: Re: Joyce C Clump
Post by: Babar on Sun 17/09/2006 16:10:30
Quote from: Mr Flibble on Mon 31/07/2006 21:31:46
Reminded me of Quentin Blake's work, and thats no bad thing.

Exactly what I thought when I saw it! Enjoyable humour too. Reminds me of Roald Dahl's extensive explanation of the The Twits.
Title: Re: Antagonizing Janice
Post by: ThreeOhFour on Mon 18/09/2006 14:52:48
Heh heh heh... Me likey. Nicely abnormal, fantastic work.