First of all , whats C & C ? Is it like constructive criticism ?
Anyway here is a sort of arab fellow im making for a game called "Nomads Adventure" . Nothing is definite and this is some concept art.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/fff.jpg)
C&C means comments and criticism, but really - constructive criticism is just as good. It can stand for Corn and Cauliflower for all I care ;D
The only thing I noticed was maybe his arms are slightly misproportionate to the size of his body?
The wrists are EXTREMELY skinny....
But, apart from that - you've got one cool arab on your hands...
Cool. Thanks.
I tried to fix him , any better now ? His name is Ahmed so far.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Test.jpg)
The position and angle of the arms is a bit off and weird but i just wanted to show his body rather than make him stand normally. It would be fixed later.
Looks good.
There's something about his left arm, try moving it inside a bit and make it as long as his right arm.
Set down his shoulder a bit, he looks awfully tense now. Also his arms need to be longer.
oh, and try to make the closer foot overlap the other, or set them further apart.
Ahmed (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/thjf.jpg)
There we go , tried to adjust it to make him look less awkward.
P.S. : Andail try putting C&C in your dictionary.
Ahmed is teh looking cool!
The left arm looks a lot better now that it's closer to the body, and that dress does WONDERS for his figure...
He even has those sexy sandals! (which look a lot better with one foot overlapping...)
Hay,
The main thing I don't like is the nose. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice nose...it's just not arabian. In general (though I must admit not always) an arab nose faces point-down, whereas yours faces up. As a result it's hard to recognise his etnic background.
Groetjes,
CJL
Good point, lol , i live in an arab country and i forgot . Thanks, lemme try to fix it up a bit.
Hmm, any better ? (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/c.jpg)
I fixed it a bit more so its more curved down but only slightly.
I find that the far foot looks funny. Maybe it should be tilted back more, so that the toes are looking closer to one another...
(ugh, that explanation sucks... sorry...)