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Title: Assignment front page
Post by: He-Man on Sun 17/12/2006 19:33:42

Hi

I'm almost done writing a big assignment on education and game mechanics. I'm working on a case with an edutainment game that teaches young people about democracy called the Powergame.
I'm printing the day after tomorrow...
This is the front page:
(http://nielshs.dk/misc/forside-realsmall.jpg)
BTW it's in Dainish...

Please comment on it!

I've resized it so quallity is a little bad. The lange one can be found here:
http://nielshs.dk/misc/forside-real.jpg <- 1.4 mb

Cheers

Title: Re: Assignment front page
Post by: JackAnimated on Sun 17/12/2006 20:07:45

Really good. Love the colours and his left hand is brilliant.

Title: Re: Assignment front page
Post by: He-Man on Mon 18/12/2006 12:11:26

Thanks for the answer. I'm happy you like it!
Anyone else got something to add?
I'm printing tomorrow...

Title: Re: Assignment front page
Post by: Krysis on Mon 18/12/2006 15:37:56

It's pillowshaded. Maybe a proper lightsource is a good idea. I love the mouth. :P

Title: Re: Assignment front page
Post by: Evil on Mon 18/12/2006 18:30:54

I'd make the table wider. At least half the width. The width of the wrist of the left hand is weird. Pillow shading isn't terrible, but some places, like the table under the arm, could use some help.

Title: Re: Assignment front page
Post by: He-Man on Mon 18/12/2006 20:07:37

Thanks
That helped a lot!
I think I'll fix the pillow shading...

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