Two tunes for c&c

[fred]

I messed around with midimaker a while ago and made these two little tunes.

1: Short tune, almost a sound effect or sound caption of sorts - could be used on 'game over' in a karate game or similar.
Chinese

2: Happy tune, jid-pop inspired. I imagine it used for a fast-paced side-scrolling game.
Jidpop

Any crits? Oh.. and feel free to use these tunes, I'm mostly just posting them to get opinions and because they'll probably go to waste otherwise.Ã, 

[Xellie]

The Chinese Song is a bit intense, sounds like a death sequence for a character in a game. All the disharmonics are not very easy on the ear, but I guess that's the idea, and then again, I'm no expert on Chinese songs!!  Better than what I could do anyway...

Like the NewSong003 very much, can picture some arcade sequence, chase, or something... nice!