Opinions on Character sprites from a Begginer?

[BobTWC]

Here are a couple of attempts at characters from a farscape parody I'm attempting


320X240



640X480

Im definatly going to use the larger of the 2, but since these are my first attempts at sprites, I wanted to see what y'all thought

any feedback is appriciated

[BobTWC]

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[BobTWC]

ok i suck how do you do it?

[Bluke4x4]

it's [ img ] type web page here [ /img ]

without the spaces.

[BobTWC]

fixed above

thanks Bluke

[Scummbuddy]

Here are a couple of attempts at characters from a farscape parody I'm attempting



320X240


640X480

Im definatly going to use the larger of the 2, but since these are my first attempts at sprites, I wanted to see what y'all thought

any feedback is appriciated




you could go ahead and not triple post, but you can edit your posts

[BobTWC]

Thanks scummbuddy, didn't see that at first.

sorry for being a pain

[oscar]

I like it, but I think the eyes looks a little sad...when looking at the pictures there's no way I could tell you're a beginner, great work

[BobTWC]

How's this look?

Before------------------------After

I raised the bottom of the eyes, lessened the angle of the eyelid, and reshaded the snout.

I think it gives her a more sultry look which is what I was going for.

Thanks Oscar.

[Alynn]

Heh farscape... I'm guessing thats the gray nympho chick?

[BobTWC]

Chiana...Chihuahua

let the leg humping jokes commence!!!

Thats going to be fun to animate

[remixor]

The face is a definite improvement, good work.