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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Technocrat on Sun 23/11/2008 21:42:51

Title: Bastard for criticism...
Post by: Technocrat on Sun 23/11/2008 21:42:51
Ladles and jellymoulds, I present Anthony Hampton, illegitimate son of Elizabeth I's Lord Chancellor Christopher Hatton (therefore justifying my subject line, and not just referring to how much of a pain he's been so far), and protagonist of my latest crazy endeavour.

(http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o33/Nedraed/3.png)


(http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o33/Nedraed/dr1.png)


Before I get any historians crawling up my inaccuracies, this guy is fictional. Just a way of inserting a character into the situation of Elizabethian England in a sort-of high-ish but unacknowledged place.
Title: Re: Bastard for criticism...
Post by: creatorlars on Mon 24/11/2008 10:51:24
this looks great, but a couple things look weird to me -- first is the torso seems too thick for what i am guessing is a pretty skinny guy.  second is the gradient on the pants doesn't seem to match the shading on the rest of the image.  maybe you could try just using 2-3 shades instead of a radial gradient.  I love the hat/face/boots. :)
Title: Re: Bastard for criticism...
Post by: Babar on Mon 24/11/2008 11:30:12
The face is not very clear. I can't tell if he has some weird twirly moustache, or a goatee and a really short face.