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I like it. The one thing that bothers me is that the shower looks more like a white cupboard to me than a shower. If you hadn't put the towel over it, I probably would not have realised it at all. Maybe you could make the doors really transparent so that the actual shower can be seen. I hope the game will also contain a good shower scene 8)
Here's a few things I would change:
- The shower - I have to agree about this, to me it looks more like a big fridge than a shower.
- I don't think the light switch would be that close to the shower (the little game people might fry themselves :) )
- Bathroom windows are usually kind of fuzzy (can't think of the right word) so people can't look in.
- Also it looks like you've missed out a line on the floor (tiles are uneven at the moment)
Anyway, enough of the crits. I like the subtle reflections on the floor... maybe this could be used for the mirror as well.
I found that the bath mat's shadow almost makes it look like it's floating.
Plus the aforementionned shower cabinet issue.
The one thing I really like, is the reflections on the floor, nice and subtle. I really like this.
Looks good, although, you should make the toilet seat more rounded. It's a little too pointy.
The mirror should have a suggestion of a reflection of the room... Mirrors are tricky, but I think you could just take a part of your picture and put it over the mirror, very transparent. From the angle, any character in the room could safely be excluded from the reflection.
apart from that, I really like the picture; it has a nice colour palette and looks pretty well done.
The outside looks a bit empty, maybe add a cloud to the window.
shade that towel next to the mirror a bit more too.
Besides those things I think this picture is pretty good, it has some nice style.
Pretty good background, especially I like these nice floor reflections. But as well for me the shower looks a bit weird. Like a wardrobe or something. I've never seen a shower with the classic door, so it just makes nonsense. Change it to typical shower door and make it transparent. Dither effect would fit fine as well.
(http://sasarin.jp/sims/obj/iw/iwshower.gif)
Perhaps some of the lines, especially on the door and floor, could use some antialiasing?