I am finally starting a game but first I want crit on my art style, so without futher ado:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bedroom.gif)
What do you think?
The pink spot is the perspective point, I just kept it in for reference. Please comment on the style in general.
Thanks in advance.
Looks good, except the light bulb look too big.
That is one huge light bulb!
I think that the bed looks odd, there are no feet it's just a huge mattress.
heheh... mods fm..
the sandwich looks a bit odd... it looks like we only see the bottom of it.. remake so we can see some side of it too and make it not facing the screen...
i like it! :D ;D
Maybe the only things i would say is that the pillow looks a bit flat, try some applying some shading.
And, the souls & mags box looks a bit strange to me, but i coudnt say why.
Other that that, i think it will work excellent in a game
You should put deep to the windows by putting that white lines more outside... It seems that the lines are flat. All the rest is ok.
Nice! The bottom of the room could do with some cropping and the two boxes could have their tops removed entirely, or at least quite a bit of their tops cropped.
OK, version two ahoy:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bedroom2.gif)
I think the changes are pretty obvious, so crit away!
hey veryweirdo.. i edited it a bit.. this edit is too obvious. :)
everything looks good but the floor..
i thought it looked better like this..
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bedroom2b.gif)
Woah cool, thanks synth, how did you do THAT? It's a big improvement thanks!
What the hell is that stuck to the ceiling?
Not bad at all. The door could use some shading though - it looks a little 2D at the moment. You might consider a shadow underneath the shelf.
Flippy - it's supposed to be a sandwich or piece of toast or something.
Anyway, I did the shading like you suggested, but the changes are to minor to post. You'd hardly notice any change from Synth's post.
Nice! You might want to do some shading on those boxes (unless you already have). They look too flat.
Other than that, I like it!
I tried shading on the boxes but it just turned out the same colour when I saved it as a gif file (limited amount of colours, y'see).
i gave it a little try too,..some shades added,thicker door,...hope you don't mind!! :)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bedroom3b.gif)
Of course I don't mind......in fact that's even better than my attempt at shading!
Do you mind if I use it in the game?
The shelf looks to thick, else it's a good pic.
not at all!!! :D
the only thing is that .....it needs more shading!!!!
Wow! Majorly good improvements.
I don't like the grassy carpet
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bedroom3d.gif)
I don't know if this is better,
but it's a try :)
A very nice picture from the start, but I must say that N3TGraph really has a point about the floor - Blue looks better.
I displike the grassy floor too, else great image.
take a jiffy at this:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/samplecol.gif)
it's what I learned at school 8)
these colours are cursing together (right?)
And this -
http://www.color-wheel-pro.com/color-theory-basics.html
The pillow on the bed needs to be detailed more. Right now it looks like page that came off a newspaper.
Quote from: N3TGraph on Tue 24/06/2003 07:53:44
these colours are cursing together (right?)
Vloeken samen?
more shading all around. and if the light is on you need to shade the bookcase differently. but nice, nice.
looks good! but i think the window looks a little strange, it dosent use the perspective point, and make the shelf use it too, and the pillow looks too small, other than that its great!
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