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Title: Bigbrain.
Post by: RyRayer on Mon 30/10/2006 14:56:28

Comments and criticism please.
Any ideas how to improve this little jerk? His dressing is simply too plain.

(http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/2541/meesti1.png)
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(http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/2541/meesti1.png)

Title: Re: Bigbrain.
Post by: Tuomas on Mon 30/10/2006 20:25:31

well, you could shorten the left arm a bit. Then possibly add pockets to the trousers and the sleeve ends or what are they called, perhaps a collar of somekind, all little detail, personally I don't think it's too plain, perhaps a bit too saturated.

Title: Re: Bigbrain.
Post by: RyRayer on Mon 30/10/2006 22:09:08

Thanks. Ok. Here he is.

(http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7330/meesbk5.png)

Title: Re: Bigbrain.
Post by: Buckethead on Tue 31/10/2006 12:16:34

it now looks a bit like the colars are his hands. Maybe his hands should be more visible.

Title: Re: Bigbrain.
Post by: RyRayer on Tue 31/10/2006 12:19:01

Oh. Ok, I have an Idea.

EDIT:
(http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/6962/meeskm2.png)
Better? I'm not very good at drawing hands though.

Title: Re: Bigbrain.
Post by: Buckethead on Tue 31/10/2006 15:49:04

looks good to me =)

Title: Re: Bigbrain.
Post by: eddie hitler on Tue 31/10/2006 17:15:23

ryrayer, I like your character alot, its quite a nice style you got there ;D.
your most recent edit is the best.

Title: Re: Bigbrain.
Post by: RyRayer on Tue 31/10/2006 17:45:52

I thank you all. :]

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