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Title: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: Krazy on Wed 21/12/2005 13:23:48

Happy holidays everyone. I've just finished work on a new 6 minute holiday animation. Go check it out here: http://www.deviantart.com/view/26623416/

Feedback appreaciated! ;)

Have a fun filled Christmas and such as is the custom to say.

Title: Re: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: Igor on Wed 21/12/2005 14:50:58

Haha, that was great :)

Title: Re: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: Corey on Wed 21/12/2005 14:52:07

thats super funny!!! same fun as family guy!! :D :D

Title: Re: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: Ubel on Wed 21/12/2005 15:29:25

Simply fantastic!

Title: Re: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: Nikolas on Wed 21/12/2005 16:11:03

Fuuny as Hell. I think that even my 2 year old son will enjoy this!

HAHA! LOL!

I can't think of another way to say that I laughed my ass off...

Title: Re: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: AlbinoPanther on Wed 21/12/2005 22:00:07

Thanks this was alot of fun ;D

Title: Re: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: Krazy on Thu 22/12/2005 05:22:47

Thanks everyone. I made the front page on www.newgrounds.com Too bad the users there are complete idiots.

Title: Re: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: Akumayo on Thu 22/12/2005 05:43:36

Haha, "same sign", "same sign", "same sign", "same sign", "same sign", "same sign", "same sign", "same sign", "same sign", "same sign", hahahahaha!!! That was GREAT!

Title: Re: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: Squinky on Thu 22/12/2005 06:35:35

Wow, I just watched that on newgrounds and thought that something was familair about it.

I have to admit I didn't watch the whole thing, but I wasn't in the mood for a long flash, I'll probably check it out later.

One crit (since this is the crit lounge), and your reviewers told you this too I am sure, the voice acting needs a bit of variety. I know it can be hard, but if you added some more diversity to the voices it would be much, much better.

Title: Re: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: Krazy on Thu 22/12/2005 08:13:11

Quote from: Squinky on Thu 22/12/2005 06:35:35
Wow, I just watched that on newgrounds and thought that something was familair about it.

I have to admit I didn't watch the whole thing, but I wasn't in the mood for a long flash, I'll probably check it out later.

One crit (since this is the crit lounge), and your reviewers told you this too I am sure, the voice acting needs a bit of variety. I know it can be hard, but if you added some more diversity to the voices it would be much, much better.

If you can call them reviews.... But yeah, I guess I should work on the voices a bit more ;)

Title: Re: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: Eggie on Thu 22/12/2005 11:42:10

It's too cartoony.
Make the eyes smaller.

Title: Re: Blue Bird Christmas Special (New cartoon!!)
Post by: Krazy on Fri 23/12/2005 06:10:55

Quote from: Eggie on Thu 22/12/2005 11:42:10
It's too cartoony.
Make the eyes smaller.

OK here's the new design for Blue Bird
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/newbird.jpg)

Adventure Game Studio

Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Krazy on Wed 21/12/2005 13:23:48