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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: obe on Sat 16/04/2005 01:41:57

Title: Boring Bathroom
Post by: obe on Sat 16/04/2005 01:41:57
Any suggestions? I'm fresh out of imagination.
I want to keep it simple however.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/obesolete/bath.gif)
Title: Re: Boring Bathroom
Post by: Mats Berglinn on Sat 16/04/2005 07:26:58
How about placing a medical-cabinet somehow and maybe put some toilet-paper next to the toilet.
Is the room really going to look that small?

EDIT: Oh and by the way, why not use differnt colors instead of just pink? In my opinion you should make the toilet white, the sink white, the paper-can red or something and maybe orange or green for the showercurtain.
Title: Re: Boring Bathroom
Post by: Angelos on Sat 16/04/2005 09:00:17
Mind the perspective.

where is your vanishing point ?
Title: Re: Boring Bathroom
Post by: InCreator on Sat 16/04/2005 09:18:51
Floor needs color!
This pale yellow does not qualify as "color".
Title: Re: Boring Bathroom
Post by: Mr Jake on Sat 16/04/2005 09:48:38
I think the walls and floor are pretty much perfect colour for a bathroom.  I think you should try Mats' suggestion and try out some differen't colours on the objects.
Title: Re: Boring Bathroom
Post by: DanClarke on Sat 16/04/2005 12:51:36
Quote from: InCreator on Sat 16/04/2005 09:18:51
Floor needs color!
This pale yellow does not qualify as "color".


erm...what?
Title: Re: Boring Bathroom
Post by: InCreator on Sat 16/04/2005 15:28:07
It's almost white!
And white kinda doesn't fit here. Either use stronger yellow or some other color, since ceilings and floors should usually be darker than walls in scenes like this.
It just fits better, somehow...

(http://www.increator.pri.ee/i/critshelp/bath.gif)

DISCLAIMER: This is totally MY opinion.
Title: Re: Boring Bathroom
Post by: Darth Mandarb on Sat 16/04/2005 15:53:54
I think, with just a little more time, you'll have a fully functional background here!

Some suggestions:
(http://www.twin-design.com/ags/help/obe_help02.gif)
- altered the contrast a little to help correct the 'washed-out' colors
- added some details (light switch, light fixture, baseboard)
- added perspective to the toilet top
- added more wall over shower
- fixed perspective on floor mat (unless that was intentional!)
- corrected the perspective on the light switch wall

I didn't use a VP, the perspective corrections were all done by eye, so probably aren't too accurate.

Hope it helps!
Title: Re: Boring Bathroom
Post by: Stefano on Sat 16/04/2005 17:10:19
I agree with Darth Mandarb's mod. The only thing I would add is a little change in the perspective on the shower ceiling (Ceiling???? You understand what I mean?).