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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Morgan on Fri 15/08/2003 19:06:26

Title: Bruce Brawn
Post by: Morgan on Fri 15/08/2003 19:06:26
This is the main character for my new game; I really hope I finish this one. His name is Bruce Brawn. His father was a great hero and Bruce is trying to go into the hero biz himself. He's all Brawn and no brains. So he will get into humorous situations were he thinks he is helping but ends up ruining everything. The guy on the end is his father who bares a striking resemblance to the man on the Brawny paper towels. I'm having a little trouble with the side view. Well I'm off to tackle the walk animation.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Brawn-family.gif)
Title: Re:Bruce Brawn
Post by: 12431 on Fri 15/08/2003 19:11:31
Nice! reminds me of johnny bravo.

so, what will he be doing to achieve herostatus? has the local museum been robbed? will he kick ass?
Title: Re:Bruce Brawn
Post by: agsking on Fri 15/08/2003 19:51:03
Looking good. The second guy (father of Bruce I think...) looks too much like a clone of the yellow haired guy with different clothes and a beard, maybe he should look a LITTLE different. He is is father but still, just a little different so you can tell he is related. Great characters though!
Title: Re:Bruce Brawn
Post by: Ali on Fri 15/08/2003 22:36:56
He's got a great stance, he looks dynamic even though he's standing still.

The third Bruce looks like he's saying: "Dammit that's my shirt! Can't you wear your own stuff Dad?"

I also hope at some point he says: "That belongs in a museum!".

What are Brawny paper towels?
Title: Re:Bruce Brawn
Post by: Nacho on Fri 15/08/2003 22:59:16
Just one thing! The outlines of the skin are too similar to the skin colour... I think it´s not easy to diferenciate them.

All the rest is ok, great work!
Title: Re:Bruce Brawn
Post by: Morgan on Sat 16/08/2003 02:09:22
I have his front view animation partially done. I'm having trouble animating his arms. It always ends up looking like he is hitting his chest. If you have any ideas they would be appreciated.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Bruce-Brawn-walk-1.gif)
Title: Re:Bruce Brawn
Post by: Synthetique on Sat 16/08/2003 02:51:16
Try something like this...
Roughly drawn
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Bruce-Brawn-walk-1bbb.gif)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Bruce-Brawn-walk-1bbb.gif)
Title: Re:Bruce Brawn
Post by: agswannabe on Tue 26/08/2003 10:12:00
i think the father should look more dweeby (for humorous purposes). love the art otherwise  :)