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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: rtf on Mon 28/06/2004 03:13:04

Title: Buildings that are dirty for your enjoyment.
Post by: rtf on Mon 28/06/2004 03:13:04
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/buildings.png)

This was made loosely based on 2ma2's tutorial thingy on his site.

I am pretty happy, but I know it could use some improvement.

ThanksÃ,  :)
Title: Re: Buildings that are dirty for your enjoyment.
Post by: LordHart on Mon 28/06/2004 04:38:06
I think you went overboard with the dirt... :P
Title: Re: Buildings that are dirty for your enjoyment.
Post by: fertoff on Mon 28/06/2004 04:49:16
looks fine,,,but the dirt looks too diffuse. perhaps more shading could give the picture some more depth
Title: Re: Buildings that are dirty for your enjoyment.
Post by: Al_Ninio on Mon 28/06/2004 05:02:42
Perspective is waaaaaaaaaaay off.
Title: Re: Buildings that are dirty for your enjoyment.
Post by: rtf on Mon 28/06/2004 14:55:52
Alright.

Once I come home (at a friend's house) I'll fix a few things.  Thanks  :D

Quote from: Os àšltimo Quão Queijo ^_^ on Mon 28/06/2004 04:38:06
I think you went overboard with the dirt... :P
Um, it was a... storm.  yeah. ..
Title: Re: Buildings that are dirty for your enjoyment.
Post by: on Wed 30/06/2004 12:44:23
Quite good. I like the perspective also it's not right. here are some more idea's

a) let the dirt flow down your buildings
b) add more dirt to the pavement & street
c) add soem more details likek the handles on the doors

Hope you don't bother that I painted a bit in your image :
(http://www.michael-baus.de/buildings.,gif)


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