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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Igor on Sun 07/11/2004 10:17:15

Title: Bunny Wabbit
Post by: Igor on Sun 07/11/2004 10:17:15
Design for some Duracell parody:

(http://users.volja.net/igorsi1/bunny1.jpg)
Title: Re: Bunny Wabbit
Post by: Privateer Puddin' on Sun 07/11/2004 10:18:50
hehe, great as usual, probably prefer the colour one this time
Title: Re: Bunny Wabbit
Post by: auhsor on Sun 07/11/2004 12:59:09
Awesome, I don''t know if there is much to critisise about your work. I do prefer the colour one tho. Keep up the awesome drawing, we all look forward to everything that you produce.
Title: Re: Bunny Wabbit
Post by: Secret Fawful on Sun 07/11/2004 18:14:21
oh my gosh :o
he stole sam's hat :o
get him >:(
but seriously
great pic ;D
like the film noir one best myself ;D
Title: Re: Bunny Wabbit
Post by: viktor on Sun 07/11/2004 20:17:55
aw look how cute he is  :D
Title: Re: Bunny Wabbit
Post by: YOke on Sun 07/11/2004 22:44:51
Although I can't really bust you for doing anything technically wrong... ;)
...I would like to share a couple of thoughts about the bunny.

- His tummy sticks out a bit too much. Very apparent in the noir version, not as much in the color version.
- If you hadn't said it was a Duracell parody, I might not have guessed that what was sticking out of his back was a battery. Looks a bit like a baby's milk bottle.

Comes down to taste really. :)
Title: Re: Bunny Wabbit
Post by: Tiki on Mon 08/11/2004 00:13:47
Well, since YOke's being nitpicky, I might as well too.

- In the noir-ish one, his shadow blends in with his feet too much.
- In the colored one, it looks like there's a shadow to the left of his larger, left tooth.  However, in the noir one, it looks like a larger tooth that is chipped.  The color version's supposed shadow looks a little odd, anyways, especially considering that you only see the top half of the tooth's shadow, so it seems. 

Looks like that's it.  Very inspiring work, man!



Title: Re: Bunny Wabbit
Post by: Igor on Mon 08/11/2004 22:36:30
Hey,
thanks for your comments :)
The bunny is one of the concept drawings for 3d guys to build a 3d model out of it... The original is colored one (though i kinda like monochromatic version, that's why i added it). Btw, his tummy was actually ment to stick out that much.
TikiTikiMan- yeah, agree with you about "tooth" shadow. I was thinking about changing it, but was too lazy in the end. Will fix it.
Title: Re: Bunny Wabbit
Post by: Flippy_D on Mon 08/11/2004 23:12:50
Neat.

I think you'd like this (http://www.frozenreality.co.uk/comic/bunny/). :)
Title: Re: Bunny Wabbit
Post by: n3tgraph on Wed 10/11/2004 10:48:56
I love the bunny! :D

a techinical flaw, which can and probably will be ignored :P
a battery needs to be connected on both sides to give power....

not that it matters at all :P