"Poster" help.

[xil]

Yea I can second Problem's point of view on the face, I think it looks quite British where as tzachs' example is very American, and I find the British style of sarcastic humour funnier.

However, please (please, please, please), don't hide the text with the shoe. It is SO annoying! I'm happy with it over the 'Happened' text but just simply move the 'story' line down to the very bottom of the poster. It can be the same distance away from the bottom as the 'wtf' line is at the top so it should work fine.

On a side note I quite like the fullness of the first idea but agree with the fading issue. I did a rough paint over to show an idea:

(I realised half way through I used the wrong font for it to be on a solid dark colour but you get the idea)

[Lasca]

I see your point. I think it messes up the composition a bit, but it gave me an idea.
I shall return!!

Edit:
Allright, so I came with a new version:



I'm having trouble deciding on the colours though, so maybe this instead:



Choices, choices...

[selmiak]

what about some flipping?

[Lasca]

what about some flipping?

Intresting... But why? Because of the shoe?

[xil]

Personally, I think flipping it to try to make the shoe become the 'P' just brings back the annoyingness of when 'pebbles' was obscured.

The more I look at the second version with the browns the more I like it, but for me, both are a nice improvement.