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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Matt Frith on Mon 07/07/2003 21:57:28

Title: C & C on a character
Post by: Matt Frith on Mon 07/07/2003 21:57:28
Hi its me again, yippee!.

I was extremely bored at school today so I decided to doodle, and I ended up doing a pretty good character. ^_^

So I inked it and scanned it in (badly) and here is the end result.  The one on the right is the same character with the hoodie down. :P

Tell me what you think. Any  C&C please :D

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pic4.jpg)

~Tier~

Title: Re:C & C on a character
Post by: Ben on Mon 07/07/2003 23:36:56
Shirt and pants are too dark. Otherwise it's good..
Title: Re:C & C on a character
Post by: agsking on Tue 08/07/2003 03:47:36
Good job! Very nice and cartoony.

The only thing I see wrong with it is that there is no moulth on the first one.
Title: Re:C & C on a character
Post by: n3tgraph on Tue 08/07/2003 08:07:10
Nice pic, teiry :)

only thing that bothers me are the arms and the very straight mouth :)
Title: Re:C & C on a character
Post by: veryweirdguy on Tue 08/07/2003 17:43:51
Okay, Tier asked me to post something, so here goes...

Maybe remove the black outlines? This is just a stlye thing of course, but I am not a fan of big black outlines.

Great character though! I'd like to hear a little backstory...
Title: Re:C & C on a character
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Tue 08/07/2003 18:34:01
kool! the only thing i can see is on the first one the face is dark green and has no mouth, part from that it looks great, are you going to use him in a game?
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Title: Re:C & C on a character
Post by: Matt Frith on Tue 08/07/2003 19:23:09
Thanks for the criticism guys.  

-First let me explain that he has no mouth on the left picture because it makes him look mysterious.

-And i might be including him in a test game so i can practise using voice speech.
Title: Re:C & C on a character
Post by: Jimi on Tue 08/07/2003 19:58:30
give him a spliff.
Title: Re:C & C on a character
Post by: on Tue 08/07/2003 19:59:05
Nice! The one on the left reminds me of the guys in that o2 advert ;)
Title: Re:C & C on a character
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Tue 08/07/2003 20:54:19
now that you mention it, me too! lol, when i first saw that advert, i didnt realize they had phones, and i thought it was going to be an advert for LP:meteora, and they were the new hybrid soldiers in discuise or something...
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