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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Morgan on Sun 01/06/2003 20:58:32

Title: Cafeteria C&C
Post by: Morgan on Sun 01/06/2003 20:58:32
This is the cafeteria in a space ship. This is the first room I have finished for my new game. C&C please
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Cafeteria.gif)
Title: Re:Cafeteria C&C
Post by: Mr Jake on Sun 01/06/2003 21:09:40
Nice, but I dont like the bin, it looks slightly outta place, a bit too big and flat. Its a  better pic then I could do :)
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Title: Re:Cafeteria C&C
Post by: TheYak on Sun 01/06/2003 21:36:23
Agreed.. based upon the camera angle, the bottom of the bin should have more curve and the top should be slightly more visible.  The table should be flatter (in other words, smaller vertically).  Excellent pic, very clean.  You might consider softening some of those black lines using other colors.  But a very functional and decent looking room, nonetheless.
Title: Re:Cafeteria C&C
Post by: makri on Sun 01/06/2003 21:47:32
The walls are off perspective... that makes the room look sloped.
Title: Re:Cafeteria C&C
Post by: Neole on Mon 02/06/2003 08:06:55
If you crop the image where the ceiling begins it should look perfect.
Title: Re:Cafeteria C&C
Post by: Synthetique on Mon 02/06/2003 08:12:16
the guy at the table seems to have a floating chair.. right?