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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Iwan on Fri 30/01/2004 13:59:07

Title: Can i have your opinion on my main charactor
Post by: Iwan on Fri 30/01/2004 13:59:07
Hi,

I have created a Main charactor but I am not sure if it's as good as it could be,

Please give my opinion on the 'Main charactor' (not the alien)

Thanks,

Iwan

(http://mysite.freeserve.com/foriwansbbcodes/images/5-picture3.gif?0.055876850734404404)
Title: Re:Can i have your opinion on my main charactor
Post by: Nacho on Fri 30/01/2004 14:17:07
Good start, but I¨am not totally happy with the colours... If she is blak, make her more "black", put her black hair and a "typical" black woman hairdress.

And I should change the colour of the jersey, as it is too similar to flesh tones... In a glance, I thought it was a top-less woman with her face painted in black.
Title: Re:Can i have your opinion on my main charactor
Post by: Penguinx on Fri 30/01/2004 16:01:27
I like it, except for the fact that I can't distinguish what or where her arms are. I like the style, especially on the alien, and it would all probably make more sense animated.
Title: Re:Can i have your opinion on my main charactor
Post by: Iwan on Fri 30/01/2004 17:28:19
Hi,

I think i will change the arms, their a bit small for her body. Also i think ill change her clothes style too and give them a pattern to liven them up.

The Alien is unfinished because, even though ive tried many times, i cant seen to get the legs right.

Anyway keep the posts comming and thanks for the advice allready given,

Iwan