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Title: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: Ali on Thu 17/06/2004 16:02:47
Hello, I've just been playing around in three dimensions. I had a go at modelling cartoonish eyes with that charming pixar-like glow. I don't really have a game in mind, I'm just playing around with character.

Here's an eye (drag and drop the link in your address bar to view):
http://themonkeyhut.tripod.com/eyeball.jpg

And here's a simple character using the eyes.
http://themonkeyhut.tripod.com/Blob.jpg

I suspect my monitor isn't calibrated so they may be a little dark. Aside from that, what do you think?
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes
Post by: Phemar on Thu 17/06/2004 16:03:54

The first says it can't be displayed because it contains errors. The second is a tripod picture...

EDIT: I like it...very pixar-ish, and that's good. The character looks nice and simple, though I think that was done purposefully.

Good work.
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: Gord10 on Thu 17/06/2004 16:05:24
Looks cute :)
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: Iwan on Thu 17/06/2004 17:14:59
It reminds me of a charactor on Monsters inc :)
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: mätzyboy on Thu 17/06/2004 17:22:27
The eye looks awesome! The little fellow wearing them looks like he was made in a rush with quite noticeable less detail. Still looking nice...
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: Sam. on Thu 17/06/2004 19:12:02
i cannot see either image. they both just say "image hosted by tripod"
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: Darth Mandarb on Thu 17/06/2004 20:59:43
Quote from: Zootyfruit on Thu 17/06/2004 19:12:02i cannot see either image. they both just say "image hosted by tripod"

Quote from: Ali on Thu 17/06/2004 16:02:47Here's an eye (drag and drop the link in your address bar to view)

Sorry mate ... just couldn't resist :)
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: Al_Ninio on Thu 17/06/2004 21:04:16
Looks real nice!

One crit: you can try making the eyeball a bit more glossy, maybe raise the spacularity or something, it just looks a bit too dry to be an eye.

And a question, did you read this (http://www.comet-cartoons.com/toons/3ddocs/eyerigging/) tutorial?
If you didn't, you should, it's great.
Loads of other tutorials on that site as well.
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: InCreator on Fri 18/06/2004 07:30:37
Cartoony? It looks a bit too realistic. But yes, It's pretty cute.
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: Mr Jake on Fri 18/06/2004 07:31:53
I like the eye!

Its got nice depth, it doesnt just look like a ball with a blue circle painted on :D
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: Ali on Fri 18/06/2004 09:57:07
Thanks for your input!

A few specific responses...

mätzyboy: The character was made quickly, I'm going to try and tweak him a little - make him look simple without looking simplistic.

Highwaygal: I didn't follow that tutorial, but I have read it and a number of similar ones before. My eye is modelled like the Adam Baroody tutorial that site links to. Baroody has a nicer iris map than me. I think you're right that it looks a little dry. I'll work on it.

Increator: I'm surprised you think it's too realistic, the iris is far too large for a human eye. What is it about it that makes it look less cartoony?

Hotspot: Thanks, that's because the iris is curved inwards.
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: InCreator on Fri 18/06/2004 15:43:30
QuoteIncreator: I'm surprised you think it's too realistic, the iris is far too large for a human eye. What is it about it that makes it look less cartoony?

Well, for me, cartoony eye means a weird shape and simple black at the middle. It's far more advanced, this eye of yours. But I really don't think this matters much, because for an eye, It's a cool one.

Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: Sam. on Fri 18/06/2004 16:44:23
Quote from: Darth Mandarb on Thu 17/06/2004 20:59:43
Quote from: Zootyfruit on Thu 17/06/2004 19:12:02i cannot see either image. they both just say "image hosted by tripod"

Quote from: Ali on Thu 17/06/2004 16:02:47Here's an eye (drag and drop the link in your address bar to view)

Sorry mate ... just couldn't resist :)

Dammit. I mean seriously. what is it with me. read then poste read then post. need a tatoo or something

those look really nice. i game in this "pixarish" style would be wicked.
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: pixelcat on Fri 18/06/2004 18:49:30
I like the character a lot, the lighting adds quite a bit to it so you don't notice how simple it is.  Really cool.  Like the hat, too. ;)
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: Evil on Fri 18/06/2004 21:19:22
It looks great, but it definatly needs to be in the head with some small eyelids. I cant help but go "Mike Wasoski!"
Title: Re: Cartoon Eyes in 3D
Post by: Moox on Fri 18/06/2004 21:21:32
Its amazing how you made a character around the eyes. good job