(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Goldfish.gif)
Comments and Crits appreciated.
Cheers,
Fluke.
Right, this does need improvement, because if you hadn't told me, I wouldn't know this was a goldfish!
Lets take a look at a goldfish.
(http://www.fosc.org/Images/Fish/large/6.goldfish.jpg)
I think the yellow bits you've done need work. Especially the back bit, hmm..
I don't know how to say it, so i did a paintover, observe the many changes and take from it what you want. (Rough paintover)
(http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b37/manicmatt/goldfish.png)
Fluke, you know I like you! You know that!
Now one small comment before I critic!
This will be the last time we crosspost, unless you do imporve your pic! Critic is there for one reason: to imporve! And especially the C&C lounge is here to improve the current images. I do honestly hope that you will post a new pic, with some changes...
Critic:
According to the pic, Matt posted, you are missing acouple of "flips". These could work really nicely!
Bring it's "loungs" a little closer and make them smaller (personal preference)
And make it's arse smaller. That's the major thing to correct!
You have shadows, and "some" details but still it could use some work...
Cheers,
Nikolas
I think it's cute ^_^
though the end of it looks as if it's got a banana stuck up in it's ass and hmm, then the back. should have more of them, what are they, fish limbs
Redo:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/goldfish2.gif)
Here i did just the changes, but not adjusting the, erm, "end region".
Redo 2:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/goldfish3.gif)
And here i did adjust it, though not as good as i would like to eventually get it.
Cheers,
Fluke.
Look at the photo above. The shape is more like this;
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/JackMartinEF/goldfish3.gif)
You know, I think of a fish, and that doesn't really resemble a fish, not one with healthy anathomy. Jack's is more like it. I did a quick paintover too, just to show you my image of a fish like yours
(http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3521/goldfish3zp8.gif)
Personally, I think that it needs to be more fish shaped as it looks to be in the shape of a bus.