First character ever created. any good?

jasonjkay · Wed 13/10/2004 13:33:14

What do you think? any good. appreciate any comments.

Nacho · Wed 13/10/2004 14:00:49

Has it been made using Eric's (Mr. C's) template? If so, a brilliant mod. If not, totally amazing IMO for it's simplicity and "functionallity" thinks I allways try to archieve. Keep in the good work, and ask yourself if its completed enough to put more colors to the dress...

jasonjkay · Wed 13/10/2004 14:08:51

I think so. I found some animated pics which I shrunkÃ,Â down and used them as a reference to paint my own versions.

Darth Mandarb · Wed 13/10/2004 15:04:26

Is that a Starfleet uniform?

I would suggest (on the front and back animations) bringing the arms in a little bit. It looks a little off to me. The front and back animations look more like he's jogging than walking.

Also, did you chop some frames out of Eric's template? His were very smooth and this seems to have a little 'jerk' in the middle frames somewhere (it's a little too fast to pinpoint).

The side view walk-cycle looks the best to me, but still seems to (maybe) be missing a frame somwhere ...

Keep it up!

jasonjkay · Wed 13/10/2004 16:14:15

Yes it is a starfleet uniform I just cant draw the combadge. No I havent cut any frames out, Its a little jerky becase I shrunk his down and painted over his.

MrColossal · Wed 13/10/2004 18:53:33

It's not from my template,

it's clive mandrake from Spellbound.

http://sylpher.com/kafka/anisprites.shtml

While I don't mind that you painted over Clive, I do mind that you didn't mention this first off.

Cluey · Wed 13/10/2004 20:00:35

pretty funky..

Chicky · Wed 13/10/2004 20:02:04

Whoot, Eric i love the TimeOut anims

mousemat · Thu 14/10/2004 14:03:45

Ha thats great well done,
but one thing that may need sorting out ,i dont like the head, it seems to small and long

Apart from that its great.

jasonjkay · Thu 14/10/2004 14:49:59

Mr.C I'm sorry I didnt mention you, I'd started on the character a month ago and got bored. Just recently I decided to finish him off but id forgotten where I got the original as I went all over downloading templates.

Quote from: mousemat on Thu 14/10/2004 14:03:45
Ha thats great well done,
but one thing that may need sorting out ,i dont like the head, it seems to small and long
Apart from that its great.

Right I'll change the head and make it bigger. Thanks for the help and suggestions.