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Title: cave room needs critics
Post by: mousemat on Fri 03/09/2004 07:16:16

Hi
I have been practicing drawing my background and i think i am getting better.
here is a cave i drew .
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/cave.JPG)

Redrawing welcome :P

Title: Re: cave room needs critics
Post by: Krazy on Fri 03/09/2004 07:26:13

What are all those white croses about?

Title: Re: cave room needs critics
Post by: Gilbert on Fri 03/09/2004 07:38:56

I think they're reflected lights, but they indeed looked like aim targets, I'll say make them smaller, or just observe:
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to see how other people drew them.

Title: Re: cave room needs critics
Post by: Andail on Fri 03/09/2004 11:58:38

I couldn't tell what anything in that picture is, let alone the cross-hairs.

I don't know what to say, really. At your age, children normally don't have their art-work criticised.

The recommended age of this forum is 16, and you still have three years of training before you offically merit the feedback of other members. Based on this, I would actually say this thread isn't legitimate.
Sad but true.

Title: Re: cave room needs critics
Post by: Sam. on Fri 03/09/2004 12:04:50

is this some kind of joke? this looks like somehting my four year old cousin would scoff at. Im sorry mousemat ut actually put some effort in before posting on this board. I have no idea what anything is in this picture i can't help you.

Title: Re: cave room needs critics
Post by: Andail on Fri 03/09/2004 12:08:49

woops, I was gonna lock it, but forgot.
Mousemat; again, train for some three years or so and come back. I'm sure you'll be a kick-ass artist by then.

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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: mousemat on Fri 03/09/2004 07:16:16