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Title: C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: on Mon 16/06/2003 15:25:04
(http://yammah.webcindario.com/Dibujo.jpg)

U like it?
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: gonzalezj on Mon 16/06/2003 15:28:07
no pic came up. Please edit to fix.
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: veryweirdguy on Mon 16/06/2003 16:34:29
I'll flip a D:

(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://yammah.webcindario.com/Dibujo.jpg)

I like it, though I think you should remove some of the double pixels. Also, his fringe isn't low enough to cover his eyes completely.
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: Proskrito on Mon 16/06/2003 17:13:21
His left foot sould be his right, and his right foot should be his left, you know, the toes are wrongly palced. Also i think feet are too big.
he seems to have a small penis ;), i think that should be the zip (?) of the trousers.
and as VWG said, remove the double pixels
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: BOYD1981 on Mon 16/06/2003 17:43:34
looks as if He-Man has taken retirement very badly...
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: Flippy_D on Mon 16/06/2003 17:59:14
Next person to say "Flip a D" gets shot in the face. With a goat.

Nice, but the feet need a bit more work. Good shading. Large belly.
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: Archangel (aka SoupDragon) on Mon 16/06/2003 18:37:58
He needs some kind of belt or elastic, otherwise his trousers would be falling down! Besides that, get rid of his penis, make his big toes on the correct sides, and it'll be pretty close to perfect ^_^
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: veryweirdguy on Mon 16/06/2003 18:42:46
What's wrong with "flip a D"? I think it's quite a nice phrase to say - sounds cool.

"Hey, Bob, I just flipped a D"

"Woah, cool!"
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: Privateer Puddin' on Mon 16/06/2003 18:49:01
do you know what it means to flip some one off?  :-\
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: Xadhoom on Mon 16/06/2003 22:48:28
As a Dane, I have no idea what it means, but I think I have a pretty good idea...heheh.
ANYWAYS, _very_ nice character, except for the crits already stated. I really like how you did his face. Loveable Cro Magnon. Great work, man. :)
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: Fizz on Mon 16/06/2003 23:01:31
i noticed the toe thing too...
otherwise nicely done

Xad: denmark eh? i used to live in cph but now i live on Fyn! (its fuckin boring though)
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: Synthetique on Mon 16/06/2003 23:05:40
can we see the real size of it too? it's a bit big..
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: on Mon 16/06/2003 23:19:42
this is not the real size, i zoomed the character to you see it better, your'e right with the feet , lol
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: Synthetique on Mon 16/06/2003 23:47:55
i know it's not the real size, i said that before!  ::)
i want to see the original size!
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: n3tgraph on Tue 17/06/2003 09:51:28
it has a lot of double pixels
which I don't like :)
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: D · Y · D · O on Tue 17/06/2003 10:59:33
Quote from: Flippy_D on Mon 16/06/2003 17:59:14
Next person to say "Flip a D" gets shot in the face. With a goat.

I'm sorry, Flippy, I think I was the one who started it.

And about the character, he looks great. I do agree with the double pixel bit though.
I don't like the crotch area, it looks wrong. And his big toes are on the outside, on the outside, on the outside.

I need to read more carefully, this has already been said.
Title: Re:C&C He's Otho, my new character, the "lemming" friend
Post by: Pet Terry on Tue 17/06/2003 11:14:42
I really like those big feets, it make it look cartoony. Remove double pixels and fix the toes. Nice work.