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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Secret Fawful on Sat 31/07/2004 16:43:37

Title: c&c my background, please
Post by: Secret Fawful on Sat 31/07/2004 16:43:37
this is a background for part two of my game, the treasure thieves.http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/albaqurque_mansion.jpg
let me know what you think. the mansion is supposed to be shaped like that.
Title: Re: c&c my background, please
Post by: UP on Tue 03/08/2004 15:47:54
Well, the lighting is a bit weird, since first of all, in one spot, you can't see anything of the wall (even though the whole wall should be at least almost equally shadowed), and on the left side there's most light (and way too much in my opinion), but still the main shadow of the house and the source of light (the moon) isn't anywhere like that...
Title: Re: c&c my background, please
Post by: Secret Fawful on Tue 03/08/2004 16:28:39
thanks
i will work on that
Title: Re: c&c my background, please
Post by: Secret Fawful on Wed 04/08/2004 01:23:54
by the way
those shadowed parts are not the sides
unlike most mansions , this one has only three sides
the other two sides are on the back of the place
Title: Re: c&c my background, please
Post by: on Wed 04/08/2004 02:53:02
The shadows don't make much sense. I did a fast edit to put all the lighted sides facing what I asumed was their light source (The moon).
http://members.cox.net/hjrodrigo/quickedit.png
Title: Re: c&c my background, please
Post by: Secret Fawful on Sat 07/08/2004 16:34:02
heres my edithttp://www.2dadventure.com/ags/albaqurque-_mansion.jpg

-changed the shadow and lighting on the mansion completely around to match the light source

-got rid of the mansion's shadow[on the ground] altogether

-darkened the lighting on the mansion

-put some dried blood coming out of the window and dripped on the one under it for a creepy effect

let me know what you think
Title: Re: c&c my background, please
Post by: UP on Sat 07/08/2004 22:14:20
Ah, well much better...

By the way, I thought the house was round  ;D
Title: Re: c&c my background, please
Post by: Secret Fawful on Sun 08/08/2004 01:03:01
thanks

and no its a triangle on it's side