I was bored, so I made this:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/new-o-rama.png)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/new-o-rama.png)
What do you think?
(I might make a game with this kind of style.)
It's a really good looking sprite.Ã, I would lengthen the legs, broaden his left shoulder a little, maybe add some definition to the torso area.Ã, I'm not sure about the flat-footed stance.Ã, Other than that, I like it!
Yes, Traveler 've already said everything that I would say, so I'm only adding... First, the pistol and trousers... look a bit weird (as for me) and definitely need some details. The same for the whole character, try shading him a little / add some details to face and "wrinkles" to the clothes. I like it, but it seems incomplete yet.
Anyway, good luck with it!
keanu reeves, ha?
Quote from: der.uwe on Mon 06/06/2005 20:49:49
keanu reeves, ha?
Hah... I bet he's Redr... sorry, Mozesh himself! ;)
Lol nope he's not supposed to look like someone in particular :P
QuoteRedr... sorry, Mozesh
I had to change my name so I wouldn't be confused with Rui "Brisby" Pires :P
So if anyone has a suggestion for a new name plz share it with me ;)
Looks great. It's a very nice style for a game.
Some shading might make him even better...
Quote from: Mozesh on Mon 06/06/2005 21:12:25I had to change my name so I wouldn't be confused with Rui "Brisby" Pires :P
So I thought.
Redru
m ->
Murder. ;)
By the way, what does Mozesh mean? Is it yer name? ;)
Voila, I've added some shading & stuff.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/new-o-rama2.png)
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(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/new-o-rama2.png)
Quote from: Skurwy on Mon 06/06/2005 22:20:23
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By the way, what does Mozesh mean? Is it yer name? ;)
Nope :P , I just thought it up.
Nice sprite! I can just imagine the guy knocking on the inside of the computer screen with his gun. Perhaps you can make his pants looser? They look pretty tight now.
The gun looks twisted. Shouldn't we be seeing the bottom of the barrel?
i know its a normal thing but his crotch is just...just :D :P ;D ;)
Modified it again:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/new-o-rama3.png)
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EDIT!!!!!:
Here's an animation of him drawing his gun.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/anim1b.gif)
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(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/anim1b.gif)
And one with a crappy kind of motion blur:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/anim2d.gif)
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(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/anim2d.gif)
C&C please
The gun should be even bigger for added effect. also, the way he pulls it out now his pants shoud snap and fall down
I think you messed it up a little bit.
The tail of his jacket is messed up around the end of the animation, on both sides.
I've made something new, but I'm not happy with it yet:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/nevernieweone.gif)
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(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/nevernieweone.gif)
EDIT:
Heres the same one, (the frames have the same delay now.)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/nevernieweone2.gif)
Um... it's weird. He's too static as for a men, who just getting his gun out and aiming somebody at the one moment. Draw a sketch first, then make some details... and search this forum narrowly, MrColossal has once posted a good firing animation sketch somewhere at this board.
I will do that, I focused more on the arms then the rest.
Yes, I think he looks static, too. Some other parts of his body should have moved.
It looks like the gun sort of just becomes from the black space under his coat.
Hm, your second animation reminds me of this (http://www.adventuregamestudio.co.uk/yabb/index.php?topic=20823.msg253980#msg253980).
You could do to fix the shoulder; there's too much body above it. His shoulder should be the top-most part of his outstretched arm when holding a gun, (aside from the head).
Quote from: strazer on Thu 09/06/2005 03:03:16
Hm, your second animation reminds me of this (http://www.adventuregamestudio.co.uk/yabb/index.php?topic=20823.msg253980#msg253980).
Oh, yeah... Kyrål has done a good job with that. Great example.
awwww...the 2nd ones pose is too boring. Work on the 1st one. Make him bang on the screen! ;D
Quote from: Babar on Thu 09/06/2005 19:07:05
awwww...the 2nd ones pose is too boring. Work on the 1st one. Make him bang on the screen! ;D
I might just do that ;)