New female character (Need help)!

[MrColossal]

like, the shading is only around the edges and kinda creeps in making everything seem bumped up like a... pillow i guess...

but i don't see that on this sprite at all

[Kweepa]

Mr Colossal: Great job on the legs.
One Thinking Gal: Nice recolour. I preferred the smaller breast - it seemed a bit more natural. Yours looks like she's wearing too tight a tshirt. Nothing wrong with that I guess.

Steve

[n3tgraph]

whoops
nevermind ^_^

[OneThinkingGal and ._.]

good lord, i was just saying it to offer another point of view. and i did say "just saying..." but whatever

I thought it was fairly obvious that he could either take the opinion or leave it without someone needing to point that out, as if I was shoving my opinion down his throat. But like you said, whatever. Don't need to turn it into some big thing if it isn't.

Steve, the breast was a bit too high and unnaturally shaped. Bigger was not really the point.  It would work fine with it a bit lower and having some mass.

The pillow shading I mentioned is in the hair, the outer edges are darker and the inner part is lighter.

Edit: I just noticed you have that exact thing about the breast in your redesign Steve, thats what I meant. That would work. Oh and I totally missed the shoulder there, good job on that. I think it needs to be lowered like that BerserkerTails.

[loominous]

Some small modifications I came to think of (based on One Thinking Gal's version).

x3 (Text reads: ORG (Original) OTG (OneThinkingGal) NEW


(Starting from top of head)

(i) Enlarged her backhead
(ii) Inverted green eye pixels to make her look forward rather than down.
(iii) Added shade to skinpixels infront of eyes.
(iv) Gave her some shoulderblades (back of thorax sticking out rather than flat back).
(v) Retracted and lowered shoulders to give a less tense - if somewhat overathletic - posture.
(vi) Modified breasts.
(vii) Reduced and raised her behind.
(viii) Retracted legs and feet one pixel to straighten her posture (looked like she was slightly bent forward)

[ravenfusion]

Pillow Shading (Pillow Emboss) is usually used for buttons, it's dark one side and light on the otherside. I can't notice any difference between pillow emboss and normal emboss, so meh.