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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: RyRayer on Thu 26/05/2005 14:20:02

Title: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: RyRayer on Thu 26/05/2005 14:20:02
This is my main character for Tommy Lebrando.
I don't know what to do with him and maybe you guys could help me out.
I just feel that his not piratey enough. :P

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(http://img204.echo.cx/img204/3188/7aawdawd4mt.png)
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(http://img204.echo.cx/img204/2756/awd1yp.png)
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: Haddas on Thu 26/05/2005 14:28:00
First of all, he looks like a teen, dressed as a pirate. Make the bandana more piratey, and make the beard a little more piratey. That looks too modern.
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: ildu on Thu 26/05/2005 14:52:47
I think he pretty much looks like a wigga now. Change the position of the feet. Make his face thinner and more interesting. Add an earring.
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: MarVelo on Thu 26/05/2005 21:01:04
I tried a few new thing e.x:

1. Larger beard
2. earing
3. taller boots
4. smaller neck

(http://img171.echo.cx/img171/8072/awd1yp5jz.png) (http://www.imageshack.us)
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: RyRayer on Thu 26/05/2005 21:08:37
Oh. Boots are nice. I'll change his head and clothes a bit.
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: Anarcho on Thu 26/05/2005 21:10:32
I think his legs look a bit off---if he were a real person he'd probably fall over standing that way i.e. with his legs so far apart.  I'd also say that his torso is a little too long and his legs are a little too short.  But the boots rock!
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: RyRayer on Thu 26/05/2005 21:48:59
Ok, here's a new version of Tom. I took your advice.
Made the bandana and beard more piratey,
made his face thinner.
His legs aren't so far apart now.
Changed his clothes.

(http://img94.echo.cx/img94/9091/18vf.png)
2x
(http://img94.echo.cx/img94/9091/18vf.png)

Any advice or suggestions for it now?
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: ildu on Thu 26/05/2005 23:35:13
Much much better. For this pic though, you could make the beard a bit lighter and greyer. Also, emphasize the eyes and mouth some more.
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: MarVelo on Fri 27/05/2005 00:44:26
Good fixes! I am quite happy with the way you addapted the boots I made. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to play your game!
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: Haddas on Fri 27/05/2005 08:41:30
(http://www.shadowreality.co.uk/images/13/18vf.png)

Dunno if this is an improvement or not. Shortened his neck a bit. Made his beard a little greyer and repositioned the beardto look somewhat more natural
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: RyRayer on Fri 27/05/2005 09:26:20
whoa. Yes, it's good. I'll use it in my game. You can all give C&C on Tommy's torso and body now. He has to be a weak man, who drinks grog, but not too fat.
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: MarVelo on Sat 28/05/2005 03:48:00
Not many changes I really just widened the body a little. Oh well this may just be a useless post...


(http://img225.echo.cx/img225/8913/awd1yp2zh.png) (http://www.imageshack.us)
Title: Re: C&C on Tommy. (RY)
Post by: RyRayer on Sat 28/05/2005 09:17:50
Yeah, Taffy T. It's not helping, but don't worry I think this is ready now.
Next, i'm trying to make a walk cycle to him, but that's my problem now. ;)
I will post my help message here ;D, in this thread, when I need any help.

And I thank you all for your help.

FINAL:
(http://img273.echo.cx/img273/4443/awd1yp2zh1gy.png)
2x
(http://img273.echo.cx/img273/4443/awd1yp2zh1gy.png)