Character!

[Pet Terry]

Hello.

I remade my main character for my game 'Goldlagoon'. I took photo's of myself and traced over them and I'm pretty pleased how did this turn out, especially I like shading. Although, I would need some help with the face, I think it looks pretty bad.




Thank you.

[Darth Mandarb]

This is pretty good!

I like the shading too.  The face isn't too bad ... I think a little more shading (mabye just one more level) might make a big difference.  2 levels (1 lighter and 1 darker) would be even better!  high light the cheeks and the nose and the chin, etc.  

dm

[Mikko]

Yeah, shading is nice. However I'd suggest few things:




Front view, from toes to head:
- Right leg looked odd somehow. With so few pixels, one pixel is a huge difference, so I think it looks better when it's straight.
- Since the right arm is scrathing arse , I'd suggest you make the armpit a bit different then in left.
- I made your neck one pixel wider and also opened you collar(finnish: kaulus?) a bit. Easier to breathe.
- I think the problem you pointed in face is it's roundness. I also lowered it a bit and gave you a one pixel-row haircut. It also seemed that eyes, nose and mouth was pixel too high. I could be wrong, though.

About the side view, from head to toes:
- I doubted you wanted it look as the mouth was open, so I closed it.
- Removed the huge nose, though, I don't know if it came any better.
- Shoulder-area looked to be bit too much back. Again, I don't know if I could make it any better.
- Maked the legs bend bit more back downwards from knees, it looked to me as if he had been falling on his back.

Hope I didn't screw it and hopefully you got some advice.

[Pet Terry]

Thanks Darth

Yey Mikko! That's just what I needed! Thanks a lot! I especially like what you have done with the downview's face. There's actually a couple more things I should fix... so wait for the updated version!

[Pet Terry]

Hello again!

I made some changes as Mikko pointed out and it looks better than the old one. Here it is: