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Mouth for war

Mon 06/11/2006 22:09:52
i've made a character for my game...maybe you could come up with some ideas how to improve it...i made two versions of it which should i stick to? it's supposed to be a guy selling newspapers

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/characters.bmp
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Babar

#1
Tue 07/11/2006 15:47:26
Hahahahha

I love the wonky anatomy. I say go for the one with the moustache and chest hair.
It might be a style thing, but I'd suggest shading some of the other things with the same level of detail as you did the face.
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monkey0506

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Tue 07/11/2006 17:19:48
...I really hate to say this...but I agree with Babar. :o

:= I think the rest of the body could use some shading. The way it is now he looks completely flat except his head.

Mouth for war

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Wed 08/11/2006 16:11:01
yes i agree...but i'm not that good at drawing, but somehow i managed to do the face pretty good...it seems harder doing the clothes...I don't ask for you to do it for me of course but maybe you could show me a few tips on how to shade clothes etc.
thanks
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KrisMacDee

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Sat 11/11/2006 20:43:12
yeah i agree with the other two, go for version 2! The moustache adds a certain character to the guy, a sort of sleazy attitude ;) lol
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gypsysnail

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Sun 12/11/2006 05:42:44
Quote from: Mouth for war on Wed 08/11/2006 16:11:01
yes i agree...but i'm not that good at drawing, but somehow i managed to do the face pretty good...it seems harder doing the clothes...I don't ask for you to do it for me of course but maybe you could show me a few tips on how to shade clothes etc.
thanks

Ah, I have some ideas on how to shade... but first tell me what program you were using to draw the character with?

(and for someone who says he is not very good at drawing, you have done a very good job! :) and I like the moustache one better too).
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Mouth for war

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Sun 12/11/2006 21:19:42
Thank you...actually I'm using Click and create (Games factory) to do the graphics...I tried to shade him a little and here's the result
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/character.JPG
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EagerMind

#7
Mon 13/11/2006 16:49:53
Unless it's meant to be a joke, the sign should be "serial killer" (not "cereal killer").

Mouth for war

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Mon 13/11/2006 17:26:50
Quote from: EagerMind on Mon 13/11/2006 16:49:53
Unless it's meant to be a joke, the sign should be "serial killer" (not "cereal killer").
I know it's called Serial-Killer but Cereal-Killer is more fun :)
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Joe

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Mon 13/11/2006 19:41:28
And was this the picture in the newspaper?



Ok, It was just a joke.
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Mouth for war

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Mon 13/11/2006 20:10:35
Quote from: Joe Carl on Mon 13/11/2006 19:41:28
And was this the picture in the newspaper?

Ok, It was just a joke.

Haha great picture
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