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Title: character and background for C&C
Post by: skullkid22 on Mon 12/04/2004 16:38:32

http://img47.photobucket.com/albums/v143/skullkid/dd.png

Tell me what you think

http://img47.photobucket.com/albums/v143/skullkid/dn.png

Title: Re:character and background for C&C
Post by: Dart on Mon 12/04/2004 17:18:49

You have a very freehandish style, don't ya?

CHARACTER

- Nice afro, but the guy's right hip is a bit too curved. Try straightening it like you did with the left hip.
- Lessen the neck's length.
- The character's left shoulder doesn't align with the character's right shoulder.

BACKGROUND
- Some of the light shining down from the lamps isn't touching the stage floor - it's like the light is stopped in mid air.
- The red seats look a little choppy. Try smoothing them out.
- The third stool from the left is either too small or too close to the stage.

That sums it up for now. Nice effort, though.

Title: Re:character and background for C&C
Post by: skullkid22 on Tue 13/04/2004 02:25:55

http://img47.photobucket.com/albums/v143/skullkid/dd2.png

I did a few improvements and by the way its not a theatre,its a restaraunt

http://img47.photobucket.com/albums/v143/skullkid/d12.png

Title: Re:character and background for C&C
Post by: Gfunkera on Tue 13/04/2004 03:26:14

Yea, that guys hips are all funked up?? Draw it more like his left side it would look much better..... It almost looks caved in?

Title: Re:character and background for C&C
Post by: Phemar on Tue 13/04/2004 08:43:13

Woah, you really have improved since your last bg you posted...

Well done!

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