BG for Critique...

[LordHart]

Okay, heres a BG I did a while ago in SCI, and also a newer version I'm doing in Photoshop. Still working on it, and wanted some feedback before I go ahead doing more on it.

I'm using Miez's tutorial a little bit, as well as doing a few things my way, and I think it's going well so far, but I believe there is room for improvement


This is the sci version...


And the photoshop one... (it's not finished yet, and the red thing down in the corner is just apart that I haven't added anything to yet )

Any C+C welcome...

[Darth Mandarb]

Man I love EGA lookin' graphics (like the top one!)

The bottom one seems off to a good start.

I would make the bottom of the little river/stream/brook/creek a little wider than the top of it (where it meets the water) because it makes it look like it gets wider as it approaches the water (does it?)  Even just a few pixels wider should do it.

The top of the buidling on the right (our right) has a wierd looking roof ... I think it's the downward slope by the bottom right corner.  It's off perspective/angle or something.

Thant's all

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