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Title: Character in mountain clothes
Post by: Monsieur OUXX on Tue 10/04/2018 23:26:23
Release candidate.

- the backpack makes zero sense in terms of size and straps. But at least it makes the sprite more acceptable to the player's eye.
- The character's face in the front cycle is too narrow.

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Links to Photoshop source files :
back (https://www.dropbox.com/s/r68dm08smq3d59s/back00.psd?dl=0)
front (https://www.dropbox.com/s/uho7u8du887t18i/front00.psd?dl=0)
side (https://www.dropbox.com/s/2fkfuvtvssmtcth/side00.psd?dl=0)
Title: Re: Character in mountain clothes
Post by: Andail on Thu 19/04/2018 13:45:18
Is there a question somewhere here? You want c&c?

I think especially the sideview is great, really fluent. Although the tip of his hair (the leftmost black pixel) should bounce a little up and down for maximal effect :)

When it comes to the N/S views, I think one of two corrections is necessary: Either a) bring his feet together a bit, or b) make him move slightly side to side.
Title: Re: Character in mountain clothes
Post by: Kumpel on Thu 19/04/2018 22:42:26
I think making the backback bounce slightly could add a little bit of life. Looks a bit too stiff without any movement.