Character Portraits

[Sparky]

I like the new pic, and the small adjustments in the sprites' posture help.

Regarding the third portrait, I think the face is pretty solidly drawn. I have a couple of extremely easy to implement suggestions. Firstly the shading in the hair seems a little two dimensional. Someone once told me, "Draw the shape of the hair, not the individual hairs." My second suggestion is that the face itself might benefit if you nudge one or two of the darker shades down a bit in brightness.

Hmm, actually now that I've posted the edit her eyebrows look a bit asymmetrical to me. Maybe her left could stand to be more angled, like her right one? And perhaps her right eyebrow could stand to be arched a little, the end angled down slightly.

[voh]

Very male jawline, though...