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[Green Man at school]

Hey Fronzel. This bg is really nice.

I coloured it in quickly at school because I had some free time.



Iwan

[Fronzel]

here is the pretty muchly finished version, I think all that I see, is that i need to add some weeds around the building, and I just saw that I didn't shaded the weeds.
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[Ashen]

I think the yellow and blue are too bright, like it doesn't really fit there. Unless that's the look you want, Green Mans colours, with you shading, would probably look mre natural. Also, I think the perspective is off on the far blue wall. Apart from these, minor, things, it looks really good.