Some musish

[Hammerite]

I just finished making this ambient, downtempo-ish track, and I was wondering what you people thought (how I could improve, and so on and so forth).

http://www.mediafire.com/?6fyq1yw00hg

Thanks 

[n3tgraph]

Hey Hammerite the link doesn't work for me

[lo_res_man]

some of what I heard was quite nice, but unfortunately there were many shifts in tone that I weren't sure if they were Doppler from a shifted microphone or intentional, and about 1/3 of the way through, there was this piano passage that really scratched my ear drum for some reason. I am sorry I give it an B+ for effort but a D- for actual niceness. sorry.

[Hammerite]

it's a fair point, sometimes i just leave noise in for the sake of it 
thanks for the crit, though.