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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Ubel on Thu 16/06/2005 17:55:25

Title: Characters
Post by: Ubel on Thu 16/06/2005 17:55:25
This is not for any game, I just felt like drawing.

(http://koti.mbnet.fi/paapeli/ukkeli.gif)

EDIT: Here's another char:
(http://koti.mbnet.fi/paapeli/ukkeli2.gif)

Any comments?
Title: Re: Character
Post by: The Ivy on Thu 16/06/2005 18:14:27
His jaw seems to be too narrow, as does his chest.  Also, you might want to use at least three shades of colour for the face if you do so for the hair.  Also, something about the position of the closer arm makes it appear to be going into his leg.  I'd suggest making the pants looser or drawing a pocket.

Otherwise, this is a neat sprite.  I like the colours and the way you did the hair.  The detail in the shoes is quite impressive, too.
Title: Re: Character
Post by: Ubel on Sun 19/06/2005 13:08:38
Thanks for the comment Ivy. I drew another character just for fun. And I think there is more to come. I got all excited about this character drawing thing. :=
Title: Re: Characters
Post by: Babar on Sun 19/06/2005 13:18:48
something weird about the proportions. His shins are wider than his face!
Title: Re: Characters
Post by: Chicky on Sun 19/06/2005 14:10:55
There does seem to be quite a problem with proportions but leaving that aside i really can't see any other problem. I 'specially like how you draw the feet.

goodwork pablo! :D
Title: Re: Characters
Post by: Ubel on Sun 19/06/2005 16:47:21
Thank you for your comments. :)

Yes I just noticed the proportion problems too, I will remember those things with my later characters.