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Title: Check out my character
Post by: ramon82 on Thu 17/04/2003 11:57:37
Hi all

I will be creating my kick ass game in a month and a half time

Take a look at the game's character in two formats...

http://www.geocities.com/lordtekno99/character.bmp
http://www.geocities.com/lordtekno99/character.jpg


Please suggestions and criticism!   ;)

Tnx all
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: ramon82 on Thu 17/04/2003 12:01:41
Darn the images cant load I am having probs with geocities  ???


I am signing up with someone else
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: n3tgraph on Thu 17/04/2003 12:03:29
hey that's great!

Mr, Big head - I like it (note, if it supposed to be a normal guy, his head is too big) cool style

2 things:
- the light outline will do, but it somewhat looks strange, but I don't know what to do about it.
- His armpits are a bit weird

But it's very cool :)
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: ramon82 on Thu 17/04/2003 12:07:18
tnx mate

you have no problems watching them? cos I cant view them on my PC...may be theres a downtime
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: ramon82 on Thu 17/04/2003 12:17:18
PLEASE USE THESE LINKS TO VIEW MY CHARACTER:


http://lordtekno.mysitespace.com/character.bmp
http://lordtekno.mysitespace.com/character.jpg


COMMENTS PLZ  ::)
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: n3tgraph on Thu 17/04/2003 12:21:27
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/characterk.gif)

there you go

A few hints for you:
- save the files as .gif - better quality in lo res
- use http://www.2dadventure.com/upload/upload.html (http://www.2dadventure.com/upload/upload.html)  to upload your images to internet (thanks to neole)

you can use the [ url] past the url here [/url ]  tags (without the spaces) to show images on the board ;)
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: ramon82 on Thu 17/04/2003 12:26:00
tnx for da info dude  ;)

Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: ramon82 on Thu 17/04/2003 14:17:44
I would like more comments about my character pls!!  :-[

http://lordtekno.mysitespace.com/character.bmp (http://lordtekno.mysitespace.com/character.bmp)
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: n3tgraph on Thu 17/04/2003 14:29:16
heh be a little patient ::)
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: Archangel (aka SoupDragon) on Thu 17/04/2003 14:32:30
The light outlines do look a little... strange. But then, it's better than I could do so I can't really complain.

hint: instead of posting more than once after yourself it's better to use the 'edit' button; and don't "bump" (post to bring the thread up the page) unless it's off the first page of the board and you haven't received a satisfactory reply.
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: n3tgraph on Thu 17/04/2003 14:36:37
Quote from: Archangel on Thu 17/04/2003 14:32:30
The light outlines do look a little... strange. But then, it's better than I could do so I can't really complain.

hint: instead of posting more than once after yourself it's better to use the 'edit' button; and don't "bump" (post to bring the thread up the page) unless it's off the first page of the board and you haven't received a satisfactory reply.

editing a post doesn't bring it up again... But I do think the 'new' icon is there again :)
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: Archangel (aka SoupDragon) on Thu 17/04/2003 14:38:30
Quote from: N3TGraph on Thu 17/04/2003 14:36:37
Quote from: Archangel on Thu 17/04/2003 14:32:30
The light outlines do look a little... strange. But then, it's better than I could do so I can't really complain.

hint: instead of posting more than once after yourself it's better to use the 'edit' button; and don't "bump" (post to bring the thread up the page) unless it's off the first page of the board and you haven't received a satisfactory reply.

editing a post doesn't bring it up again...

Note the semicolon, which seperates two clauses.
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: ramon82 on Thu 17/04/2003 14:47:16
Well I ve designed the character today and I only spent about 15mins using MS Paint.  ;)

However I think that I will be using it in my game, maybe modifying some things. I think the light outline is nice because it gives the character that 2D look and it looks as if light is reflecting around the character. Well I will think about it  :-\

Tnx...MORE COMMENTS!!!!  ;D
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: n3tgraph on Thu 17/04/2003 14:49:11
Quote from: Archangel on Thu 17/04/2003 14:38:30
Quote from: N3TGraph on Thu 17/04/2003 14:36:37
Quote from: Archangel on Thu 17/04/2003 14:32:30
The light outlines do look a little... strange. But then, it's better than I could do so I can't really complain.

hint: instead of posting more than once after yourself it's better to use the 'edit' button; and don't "bump" (post to bring the thread up the page) unless it's off the first page of the board and you haven't received a satisfactory reply.

editing a post doesn't bring it up again...

Note the semicolon, which seperates two clauses.

it does?
oh well  :-[  ::)
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: Phemar on Fri 13/02/2004 03:56:42
Quote from: N3TGraph on Thu 17/04/2003 14:49:11
Quote from: Archangel on Thu 17/04/2003 14:38:30
Quote from: N3TGraph on Thu 17/04/2003 14:36:37
Quote from: Archangel on Thu 17/04/2003 14:32:30
The light outlines do look a little... strange. But then, it's better than I could do so I can't really complain.

hint: instead of posting more than once after yourself it's better to use the 'edit' button; and don't "bump" (post to bring the thread up the page) unless it's off the first page of the board and you haven't received a satisfactory reply.

editing a post doesn't bring it up again...

Note the semicolon, which seperates two clauses.

it does?
oh well  :-[  ::)

Sorry, had to carry on, anyway, maybe replace the light outlines with darker color of the thing it's outlining...
Title: Re:Check out my character
Post by: Das Plans on Fri 13/02/2004 08:58:56
Hiya,

I really like your character. It might sound odd, but he reminds me of a guy I used to know. And let me tell you this: women adored him.  ;D

The only things I would work on are the light outlines. But that has been said before, anyway.

Then there´s something about his armpits. Looks strange to me, but I´m not sure how I would fix it. Maybe put the chest in front of the arms, if you know what I mean. But it´s just an idea.

Great work!