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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Inkoddi on Sun 23/11/2003 13:02:18

Title: Comments and Criticism on this beautiful Background
Post by: Inkoddi on Sun 23/11/2003 13:02:18
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/observ0.gif)

C&C on this please! It's some kind of primitive alien observatory.
Title: Re:Comments and Criticism on this beautiful Background
Post by: Nacho on Sun 23/11/2003 14:27:01
Why are there two meteorites? It looks very weird for me, specially considering that they´re perfectly alligned in the sky. Where you testing diferent styles of meteorites? If not, you should remove one, or at least change its size or location.
Title: Re:Comments and Criticism on this beautiful Background
Post by: Kweepa on Sun 23/11/2003 15:15:29
I'm guessing the lower moon is supposed to be a reflection in a water surface. That would explain the seam running across the sky.

So, in other words, Inkoddi, it's not at all clear that that's water. :) I'd ripple it a lot more.
Title: Re:Comments and Criticism on this beautiful Background
Post by: Eggie on Sun 23/11/2003 15:32:40
I like the colouring style ALOT.
Title: Re:Comments and Criticism on this beautiful Background
Post by: Inkoddi on Sun 23/11/2003 16:09:06
How's this?
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/observ1.gif)

ARGH! Fergot the dooor
Title: Re:Comments and Criticism on this beautiful Background
Post by: Chicky on Sun 23/11/2003 20:33:57
WOW inkoddi! thats really great, i seriously like the style. I really like the cartoony feel, i think its great. Keep up the good work, oh and i love the colouring  ;D
Title: Re:Comments and Criticism on this beautiful Background
Post by: Matt Brown on Sun 23/11/2003 23:23:11
I like...it reminds me of the neverhood...

minus the clay..

and the duckman..
Title: Re:Comments and Criticism on this beautiful Background
Post by: Kweepa on Mon 24/11/2003 19:51:10
Much better - I like the interior :)