Company title screen

[Blade]

Here's some sketch I made with Paint. Feedback much appreciated, especially on the horseman's head and horse's legs.

[Scummbuddy]

well, generally, horses heads are much larger than a humans. But I really like what youve done so far. I suppose just enlarge and lengthen the snout.

I would also say to shorten the tail a bit.

and I'm also fairly certain that if a horse moves one of its back legs, it would move a front one to either balance it out on the ground, or counterbalance it up in the air... so what I'm saying is the leg positioning isn't correct, in my eyes at least.

I would also say to vectorize the image once youre ready, and itll make all the jaggies go away, plus will work great for resizing the image. Vectors rock my socks.

cant wait to see an update. good work so far!

[Blade]

Slight changes to the heads and a curled leg at the front added.

[Flippy_D]

I still say the head should be considerably larger. Otherwise, nice. Memorable.

[Phemar]

It's very good, but see this random google image:

http://fourh.ucdavis.edu/4hresource/clipart/people/pics/horse%20english.gif

The tail is a different shape, is all. That's about the only thing I'd really change.

P.S. Don't listen to Scummbuddy, he's like the American Government, trying to brainwash us all into believing vectors are cool.

(j/k scumm)

[Blade]

I've updated the screen at the top of the thread. Changed the horse head and I think it should stay as it is. I've also changed the tail a little. Not sure about the curled leg at front, I feel like there's something wrong with it. I'd like to liquidate the jagged edges of the triangle, but don't know how to achiev that in Paint so it will stay as it is until I can use Photoshop or something else to do it.