My first piece of music, MP3 for C&C.

Nine Toes · Thu 20/05/2004 05:51:44

Acoustic1.mp3
Right-click link, then "Save As".

This is the first peice of background music I have ever written.Ã,Â I'm fairly pleased with the first part (the slow brooding riff), while I'm not so pleased with the second part (the faster, more upbeat part).

Can anybody suggest anything to make the song better?

EDIT:Ã,Â I know... it's a huge file for a song... I forgot to ZIP it before I uploaded it...Ã,Â $:-\$

stuh505 · Thu 20/05/2004 06:32:02

after the guitar comes in...make a flute come in

when the second guitat melody (the lower one) comes in, the first 3 notes are good, then it's bad. instead of whatever notes come after these first 3....make it play the original melody in this lower tone.

i think those'll help a lot

happy music making

Andail · Thu 20/05/2004 11:17:07

I can't reach it...strange

HillBilly · Thu 20/05/2004 11:36:57

Sorry, but the page or the file that you're looking for is not here.

"Lucy, you got some splainin' to do!"

haha.

Peter Thomas · Thu 20/05/2004 14:25:09

I can't get it either. This maketh me sad.

Dart · Thu 20/05/2004 14:30:15

Mr. Hyde, wouldst thou uploadeth thy piece of art to another site?

Nine Toes · Fri 21/05/2004 23:38:55

Hmm... lemme see what I can do...

Nine Toes · Fri 28/05/2004 21:47:34

Alright, I think I found the problem, and fixed it.

Try again, pleeze.

Damien · Fri 28/05/2004 22:13:37

I still can't listen to it.

I tried everything.

auhsor · Sat 29/05/2004 04:58:45

Yeah its not there. I tried it in Getright too, and it couldnt find it.

InCreator · Sat 29/05/2004 14:57:35

zipping a mp3 won't help much. It may sometimes even make file BIGGER! but yes, Link sounds strange and track won't make any sound at all, because I can't reach it - server is superslow and never gets to downloading part