Right.
So, this is a concept sketch for a character, he's supposed to be the CEO of a company about to go bankrupt.
That's all I have to say about him so far.
Sketch (http://personal.zahav.net.il/personalsite/ye/yesz1000/2.jpg)
Sketch with a bit of colour (http://personal.zahav.net.il/personalsite/ye/yesz1000/colour.jpg)
Crit me.
Crit me as hard as you can.
But I already noticed the eyes aren't aligned :)
Well, unless he was a very smart guy (and he probably isn't if his company is going bankrupt), he's a little young for a CEO.
Just my opinion.
Could be a .com CEO...
I like it a lot.
This is way nice :). He looks verry stressed out.
Not bad for concept art (for acuracy sake though his side on the right shouldn't end under his arm pit - it should be a little further back than that- almosdt half way down that arm) looking forward to the pixel version.
Maybe he inherited the company. :)
Love the sketches gal, eager to see the pixel version too :D.
All I can think of off the top of my head is the tie knot. It looks a bit strange the way it is now. I mean, even if you loosen the tie, the knot usually stays the same (at least that's how my ties behave :)).
I've made a quickie to show you what I think it should look like:
(http://premium.uploadit.org/eastman/tieknot.jpg)
Haven't worn a tie in a year now, so I could remember wrongly. Other than that, I can't see any problems. It's looking good. As far as his age goes, there aren't any set rules (that I know of) stating you need to be of any certain age to be a CEO, so I wouldn't worry too much about that ;)
Bill gates started microsoft as a college dropout in his early 20s
..yea, but his company ain't bankrupt.
Unfortunately.
This looks great! The only crit I have is that the head is to big in proportion to the body...
Really good looking!
this realy is nice. But the neck is a bit to widwe in my opinion. It's almoast as wide as his head.
viktor, my neck is as wide as my head, and I'm not that big of a man. The neck looks just fine.
Wow, lots of replies!
ScottDoom: Listen to Ginny. She's a smart girl :)
Mr Frisby: Thank you, that was JUST the thing that annoyed me in the sketch that I couldn't spot.
Kyraal: Thanks for the tie knot quickie, helped me a lot :) I haven't used any reference on the sketch, because I'm stupid :P
Viktor: It's actually quite a normal neck. Might be a bit too short though.
Thank you all :)
well for starters you need to get rid of the big horizontal lines across his face ;)
only kiding, it looks wonderful. lots of character, if you keep this up your game will look marvolous!