Craphics from "Ashrad: The Evil Arrives"

[Ishmael]

Ok... I re-wrote this post... Below is the main character and his idle anim. (Delay is 1 sec...).



The Secon version of the walking down anim:

There seems to be a problem with it... I'll upload it elsewhere...

Another arts:
The first boss

Info site:
http://www.freewebs.com/tk_ags/index.htm

PLEASE COMMNETS AND SUGGESTIONS

[n3tgraph]

ofcourse he would fit in a game!

some improvements:
- his head has a vertical line in it which looks a bit odd
- try to use dark outlines instead of black - black is too dark imo.

[Jimi]

Yes, and his left foot curls over slightly on the bottom, otherwise...WICKED!

[Ishmael]

THX, dudes.... The outlines is in my to-do list...  

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A vertical line..?

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Oh that.... gotta add to my list...

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Ok... fixed... or is it?

[Ishmael]

Ok... thanks again... I fixed those things (or at least tried) and added that other profile image I have drawn...

[Jimi]

Much better! Now...MAKE THE GAME! Sorry, I just can't wait.

[Ishmael]

Love to... but Sledge is unfinished... but I have been doing it like half a image for week, coz I've been a bit lazy with it... AJA don't you dare repeat yourself! I think I can work on two projects at the same time... When I have no motivation for the other, I'll work on the other one...  Thanks a lot!

[AJA]

AJA don't you dare repeat yourself!

Why can't you just finish Sledge first? If you keep starting new projects before the projects you're working on are finished, you'll never get anything finished...

[Jimi]

Say no more! I am even lazier. I can't seem to get my bus scene done, because every time I draw it it looks absolutely CRAP!  

[Ishmael]

One project in production now, and like I said, I'll work on them side by side... I had no plans to start a new project before Sledge is finished until I drew the avatar, then the whole dude, then Jimi said "Make the game", so I concided the sitiuation, and came to the conclusion that I could work on two projects the same time... Besides the Sledge topic has been quite passive, so I think there aint so much people waiting for it...

[Ishmael]

Update: Re-wrote the first post, added the first room bg, the idle anim and the two mids... my first musics! Comments, please.

[Evil]

I love the background. I think it fits the character more then the character fits it  (that make sence?). Anyway, the character has a good start, but he seems to, um, have a gangster stance while dressed in total opposite. Maybe move his feet closer? And as for the background, add more buildings in the background. I think it would look much better that way.

[Ishmael]

I think I was after a gangster look... dunno...

I was wondering if you people want to get playing this game soon, meaning that I make this game quite short, then make a sequal to it, in which the story continues (like "Ashrad: Dark Times")... or do I make one game from the whole, long story? This would send the release date to the distant future... from Jimi's reaction, I would say he votes for the first way...

[Jimi]

Evil has a point though. Also, when his eyes move, he looks too shifty. Like he's selling drugs or someyhing.  

[Ishmael]

Hmm... yeah, maybe, but he is a misunderstood kid who everybody thinks is a total lunatic, and as the story tells, he has a good reason to be aware of everything what moves or dont move...

[Jimi]

I was hiding from someone, it would be reasonable.

[Ishmael]

um.... what does that mean? I'm not SO good in English....  

[Jimi]

It means that it would be OK to look that way if he was hiding from someone, otherwise, it would look a bit suspicious.

[Evil]

um... a little better

[Ishmael]

Hmm... I dont know... Well, I'll see what I can get done with it myself, concidering all the suggestions. I dont know if he is hiding from someone... maybe, the story is uncomlete, so I dont know yet...

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What do you think of my mids?