room of Max&Jay

[Moebius]

Hello guys,

I need criticism:



That office room was created to my one-room-game. Alas, becouse of his specific style I will had troubles with drawn characters (2, btw they will be static but the animations...). So I put this picture here becouse I want to know what you think abot it. If that style goin' down to you I'll try to paint characters.

(sorry for my language mistakes but I still studing English)

Thanks for your attention,
Moebius

[Babar]

Good work! I think you should make the outlines on the light bulb a bit thinner. And show some of the scenery outside!

[Oliver]

What's up with the door. It looks odd. Maybe just make a brown "office" style door.

[Moebius]

Hey, the door must be metal! (specification of plot)

But, yeah, it looks strange, so I make some correction.
I add the scenery outside and fixed outline of light bulb.
Additionaly I add a blur-effect to painting.