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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Stee on Mon 19/09/2005 09:36:32

Title: Critique on background
Post by: Stee on Mon 19/09/2005 09:36:32
Although absolutley hopeless at art, i am designing a few backgrounds for a new game i am currently designing. I have to put a bed in here somewhere at some point but couldnt get the proportions right. Anyways here is the image i would like some feddback on if you will guys please

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/bedroom1.JPG
Title: Re: Critique on background
Post by: Nikolas on Mon 19/09/2005 09:42:14
The closet is all wrong, in matter of perspective. The above right part should "look the other way". and the room is definately empty.
I don't think that your room is that empty. I know that you're missing a bed, but it seems that you need a lot more... Sorry for being like that...


The bed, depending on where the door is, of course, could probably go under the window...
Title: Re: Critique on background
Post by: Stee on Mon 19/09/2005 11:29:55
you mean the angle should be "/" rather than "\" ?
Title: Re: Critique on background
Post by: ildu on Mon 19/09/2005 12:13:11
I find the total lack of a base and sides of the closet more troublesome than the lack of correct perspective. But you need to correct both. Just think. Look around your room. It's not hard to see what's wrong with your background.
Title: Re: Critique on background
Post by: Khris on Mon 19/09/2005 12:20:42
Here's a very basic tutorial on single-point perspective:
http://www.olejarz.com/arted/perspective/index.html
Title: Re: Critique on background
Post by: Stee on Mon 19/09/2005 14:02:39
Thanks I'll get onto it when i got home